#60 Close Your Eyes
We can't always be with the one we love, yet sometimes if you close your eyes, you can feel them nearby by remembering the things you did together. Close your eyes today and remember. Make the passion come alive that you once shared with the love of your life. For in our memories...love always survives.
This poem originally was published in Love Poems
Close Your Eyes
I can't be with you today but if you close your eyes and think; I'll be beside you in the kitchen wearing your shirt - standing by the sink. I'll be with you in the bedroom waiting quietly on your bed; Just close your eyes and think of me, relive those memories in your head. I'll stand by you in the bathroom, an unlikely place to meet; I'll smile at you so playfully as I let you brush my teeth. I'll be your light in the darkness, shining steady through and through; You only have to watch it glow to know I think of you. I'll be the music that you listen to, I'll be there in every song: I'll laugh with you and sing with you, and comfort you when your day's gone wrong. I'll be the wind that ruffles your hair, I'll be that warm embrace; I'll be the hand on your shoulder, I'll be the tender touch on your face. I'll be the clock gently ticking, reminding you of the times; We've shut the rest of the world outside we're in our own world - yours and mine. I'll be the moon as it dances on the water cold and still; For I have loved you always and I know I always will. Though you may not see me physically as you live your life today; Just close your eyes and think of me I will not be far away. |
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1999
Judy Burnette
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61 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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gloriaMy life in a nut shell: Not being with "My Soulmate" in the flesh but only deep in my heart soul and mind.
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BrittanyThis poem touched my heart because it reminds me of people that I never get to see and it reminds me how much I miss them
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ClaireI loved this simple poem. My hubby and I have had a difficult year and when we are not together I know how much he misses me. This was the perfect poem to send him, thankyou! Claire
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juliethankyou very much for your lovely poem it is good to read some that are that touching when your down and out so thankyou keep writing
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Mariai love this poem it means so much to me it has touched me in such a special way. It has described and express my inner feelings towards the one i love.
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SuranganiI greatly appreciate your poem. It is superb. I sent it to my loving husband thank you
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MichaelThis poem means very much too me, and reminds me very much of the relationship I have with the girl I wish to marry
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HannaThis poem was a very sweet poem and it meant a lot to me.
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VictoriaIt's how I want my husband to think A beautiful poem
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kerstinlovely poem, this really describe the a true loving relationship
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sARABEAUTIFULL
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EmilyBeautifully written, it reminds me of my dearest love. I can't be with him, but I know when he closes his eyes, I can be there in his arms. Amazing. Thank you, you express the need to be with someone so poetic and perfect. :*)
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princessGreat Poem! It reflects perfectly my own situation,since I can't be with my lover every moment
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gloriathank you!!!CLOSE YOUR EYES,touched my heart...
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SteveI have a special friend in Ireland. I know how much this will mean to her when I send it. It definatally touched me deeply !!!
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RikiAlthough the woman I met in ICQ and I had our civil wedding two weeks ago, we are not able to be together forever yet. That will only be in June. You probably can understand why your beautiful poem is so special for both of us.
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JenniferYou could tell that she felt very deeply about the person she was reaching out to. I've never knew that there was someone out there that could express, not only their feelings, but help someone else recognize how they feel also.!!!!!
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AliciaI really enjoyed your poem.It describes me and my boyfriend.I hope you don't mind if I send him a copy!!
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tamarathis poem is beatiful it really meant alot to me
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KrickittBeautifully delightful and true.Describes my very secret to being with my love.Thanks.Definatly recommended!
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JamieThe poem was beautiful. I am not with the man I love right now and I really miss him. The poem is true though all you have to do is think about the one you love and some of the pain will go away. I am also using this poem for an assignment in english.
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SandiI could relate to the poem. It was just great.
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ConnieI love this poen. I just cant get over it.
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CarmelaI enjoy all of your poetry. I hope you will keep on writing.
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kenyamy husband is away and i know that he would love to heear the words of devetion and you have put it into a lovely poem.
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ashda bomb!
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PrincessWonderful piece. Its something I can, or perhaps, a lot of people can relate to...
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DeliciaWonderful
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bobbiLoved the poem. It captured the exact way i feel when i am away from my boyfriend. We are finally going to be together after being apart for some time but not before i send him this poem to let him know i love him and soon we won't have to just think about it anymore
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kassielike it
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APRILit was a beautiful poem
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TerryBeautiful, absolutely beautiful.... It brought a tear to my eye! My fiance' and I are 1000 miles apart and this poem just brought me closer to her...thank you Judy
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harvey"its a very lovely poem,its one of the best!".
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ChrisI don't know who this poem was written for but I felt very intimate and beautiful. Whoever you love is one lucky guy. I loved it.
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jessYou took the words right from my heart
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ElenaWhen I read this poem it literally made me cry. I am away at college and it 100% expresses how I feel.
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VanessaI thought this poem was so nice I almost cried when i read it.
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CaseyI loved your poem!! It was so true to life!! I feel the same because my husband is in the Marine Corp and I dont get much time with him.. Its nice to know that I am not alone!!
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rustythis poem reminded me so much of the one i love
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CandyI loved this poem because it remind me that while my boyfriend was gone at boot camp for the Army that he is still very much in my mind
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Kittyeach year for the past 4 years i have been going off to a university in NC. Unfortunately my fiance lives in MD and about 7 hours away from where i am 70% of the year. Its tough but love prevails as this poem mentions.
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natalieThis poem said a lot for me when i was at a loss for words, it's a beautiful poem and is very well written. The artist did a very good job.
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JessicaThis poem was awesome!
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DebThis was a perfect poem for a most diffcult times in my life
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PortiaBeautiful, makes you really sit and think about loved ones
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JillI really like this one too. It brings me all the memories that we've shared and will share in the future. And it makes me think of my fiance and I smile.
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AlyssaI fell in love with this poem because it reminds me of a time that I shared with someone once. It touched me and I want to thank the author for writing it!
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StephanieIt was great thank you
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MaryThis was THE poem I needed. It said all I felt and all he needed to know.
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LennartStruck me as a brilliant way of discribing love on a diance.
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LeahI adored this poem. Thanks so much for letting me have a chance to read it. I may use this for my husband some day.
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gordonat the moment my wife & daughter are in England on holidays and it discribes the way i feel perfectly .
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Tinaabsolutely brilliant, amazing!
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edgarthis poem its just what i do when my love is far from me so that i know she`s here with me
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LeahThis poem says exactly what I think and feel when I can't be with the one I love. Thank you for expressing it so well.
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LuI just loved this poem...so true for so many people... beautifully written thank you
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Annelovely writing. wonderful detail.
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carrieI only wish I were this talented to express my thoughts and emotions with simple, yet, very powerful words.
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JohnI loved it,made me smile....gonna go look and see if she has any more like it
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michaelGREAT POEM
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