I wrote this after a wonderful dream. I believe the poem describes it rather well. I'm hoping this dream comes true. Only time will tell.
This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Erotic Poems
More Than Passion
Silently she awakes and gazes upon him there. She sees him sleeping peacefully and longs to hold him near. She reaches out her trembling hand to gently touch his face. Remembering short hours ago, sharing love's embrace. He stirs just then and spies her tender. loving stare. Then places his hand over hers, stunned at the extent of her care. Their eyes never leave each other as she caresses his soft skin. She smiles at him slightly as she moves closer to him. He takes her in his arms placing a kiss upon her cheek. She turns her head slowly, his lips for her to seek. A subtle moan escapes her as his hand explores anew. Passions kiss intensifies as their rhythmic dance ensues. He proclaims his love for her as he kisses her wanting neck. She moves her hands over him finally to rest upon his chest. Feeling her velvet secret engulf him again and again, And feels her building climax escaping from her then. She arches back, catches his eyes adoring their allure. As they reach their perfect harmony, together once more. |
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1999
Sally
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81 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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MariahI thought that this poem showed a great deal of passion. so much so that it seems as though you're living in the moment while reading it. I personally give it five stars! Beautiful!
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aliciai loved this poem! it is awsome i am gonna send it to my boy in iraq
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aliciathis is awsome!you did great
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CrystalI loved it alot!
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SHERRYI LOVED THIS POEM, THERE IS A MAN IN MY LIFE THAT I RECENTLY MET, AND THE WAY I FEEL ABOUT HIM IS TOLD SO CLEARLY IN THIS POEM.
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Catherinei really feel this for some one that i just to be with and it make's me think of him again that was the best time
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brendai enjoy the poem and it touch my heart and you have my vote keep write them beautiful poems
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aarthithe poem vas great. it brings out the sexual feelings in man in a most adorable manner
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mitaliit reminds me of a time that i din wanna let slip outta my hands. so i can kina relate to it. showed it to my bf n he loved it! i love it because it has been written in brilliant candace and expressiveness.
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tabithathis is byfar the best poem ive ever read. you really do have a way with words. u helped express myself through your words, its deep, and heartwarming. keep writing me and my lover LOVE it! BEAUTIFUL!
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SarahJust felt like me in the poem with a man I love deeply.
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virginiagreat peoms the words i cant say
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TaraWOW! This poem defintely brought back wonderful memories. It makes me think of my boyfriend and remember our love for each other. Great poem!
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CarmenI like the poem, cause it remind me the fist time I meet my boyfriend, pluse I'm a very passion person
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LovelyHEY! I like, I like. Sounds like me and my hubby!
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StephanieI really loved the poem and the way you expressed yourself. When I read i got goosebumps that' when you know a poem is good.
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Moniquei really loved this poem, it was very deep, i felt it. keep writing
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VicExcellent, very subtle and beautiful.
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KIt was just like one of my dreams. I still get chills.
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crystalWOW! Thats really all i can say about this poem. I loved it.
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Ladyi loved the poem it's one of the best i've read sence i hooked up to this site. trust me dreams like that do come true. it's the greatest feeling in the world when you conect with the one you love.
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MikeThis poem has put into words what i cannot, The beauty of sharing. Thank you so much for sharing it
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LizThis poem is perfect. It couldn't have been written better!
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ReemThis poem is very meaningful. You sure did a wonderful job Sally! keep it up :)
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TramaineDamn that was tight, so much sexual intensity just reading it made me want to call my man up and make love to him all night. Beautiful Baby!
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DELILAHWOW! REAL GOOD!WHEN YOU READ SOMETHING AND IT GIVES YOU CHILLS AND MAKES YOU PONDER IT'S GOTTA BE GOOD! YOU CAN FEEL THE PASSION!
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bThis is so true, and I really feel this poem, so whoever came out with the words, your amazing, and keep it up, it is so hard to get the words out you realy mean, and this poem says it all!
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JessieI felt like I was watching a scene in a movie.
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DAWNEI think your poem is AWESOME. I totally relate. 2 months ago ,I would have said this feeling didnt exsist . but love found ME.
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JesseWell stated Passion.
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LailaThis poem gave me goosbumps! My boyfriend an I are apart and I sent it to him , he said the same thing. This is exaclty how I felt the first night we were together. This brought us closer, even though we are so far away from each other.
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kariwow this poem was great! good job!
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JenSally , This is the best I've read! Truly gives one hope of what Love and bring. Beautiful !
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BillA wonderful work
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DeeDeThis poem was the perfect poem, I needed a poem to break the ice for someone very special, and it worked. you truely are an insperation to me. thank you so much. (we are getting married in 5 weeks and i could use one for our vows if you are up to it. )
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AHMEDTHIS POEM REALLY TOUCHED ME AND ITS FOR REAL COZ THATS EXACTLY HOW I FEEL ABOUT MY WIFE, THANKS
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triciaThis was a very beautiful poem. it reminded me of my feelings for my husband and i enjoyed reading it very much.
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BillLovely poem, very personal
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DannyWithout question, the best I've ever read on this site. My lover adored it.
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naomiThis poem is soooooooo deep, I really loved it. It accurately depicts the feelings, emotions, and thoughts between two people inlove making love.
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BillWonderful words
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AubreyThis poem is so beautiful and it really touched me. I totally feel this way about my husband. I know exactly what your talking about. Keep up the good work..
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LisaI really liked this poem. Totally from the heart.
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mikei never thought id find something this intense in spirt, thank you
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DeborahThis is a very good poem, if I had a $1000 dollars for a grand prize give away you'd be the winner.
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aichabombits an excellent poem!!
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angelinaDeep enough to give shivers, beautiful enough to wow a person!!
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EricaI really enjoyed reading this - reminds me of my one true love!
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TexasVampytook my breath away ;-)
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sharionThis poem physicaly and mently moved me. The poem is a great contribution and or love story I loved it.
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MissySally, This poem is so intimate and so TRUE. THANKS
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starrLoved this poem. It really gets to the feelings one experiences.
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MargoExcellent: Can't express anymore then excellent poem because I can't find the word that is better than Excellent Poem. It is a beautiful poem. Touched my heart because of expressing the true feeling of loving
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martinexcellent poem. wow. real feeling and depth.
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WILLIAMRELATABLE!
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nikkigood poem it reminds me of the way i feel about my boyfriend
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CriscoWarms my heart and gives hunger to my soul
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Jenniferoh my gosh...FANTASTIC POEM!
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danellLast night my husband treated me to the most amazing expression of love I have ever known. I wanted to remind him and thank him in a special way.your poem is perfect!
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RachelI have not ever felt something so passionate!
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ANGELAGREAT JOB
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EmmaSent shivers down my spine it was very familiar to me!
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Raymondso passionate and touching; heartfelt;
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SimonI wonderful open, honest piece of very tender writing - thank you Sally.
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JackI truly feel the kiss upon my cheek and warm, smooth hand as if it were a feather
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ChristineSally, What a beautiful poem. I will send it to my boyfriend.
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alantrue
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GeriExtremely sensual and gorgeous!
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Irishbeautiful
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ShelleyThis poem was intriguing for me only because my true love and i will soon be reuniting and this describes how we will be once we are together again!
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MARCYYOUR POEM WAS SO TOUCHING AND SO HEARTFELT. IT WAS VERY BEAUTIFUL AND TOUCHED ME TO NO END. THE LOVE AND PASSION THAT YOU DESCRIBE IS THE WAY I FEEL ABOUT MY HUSBAND, BUT COULD NEVER EXPRESS SO BEAUTIFULLY. THANK YOU.
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RichardI've been there before with the woman I love. But words will never capture the moment. Good job.
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GinaOne word: WOW.
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JeanBeautifuly done, once again "Sex" is not just That, but an expression of Love, commitment
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candiceas I read your poem it sent shivers thru my body. it spoke of the love and tenderness that my fiancee and I have for each other Thank you so much for this gift of poetry
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HeidiI love these poems. I put these in my favorites. They are Perfect! Thanks for this site! :o)
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XHPIETOEThis poem is wonderfull and artistic and open and the one thing that exites the inner inspiration in ones sole .
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ScarlettI was searching for the perfect poem to send, and it took hours of searching, until I found this one. Great meaning, great expression, great detail.
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AmberI couldn't have said it better, this is exactly what it's all about!
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shaddIt was very good
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sandrai love this poem. It describes their emotions so vividly..
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