#48 I Want To Know
This poem ask the question many of us seek when we enter a relationship - whether it will be intimate or plutonic. It expresses my own inner thoughts, yet gives that special someone the opportunity to express theirs as well.
This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Love and Friendship Poems
I Want To Know
I want to know the you That has not been introduced to anyone else. I'm talking about the you That you've been keeping to yourself. I want to know your most recent fantasy - You know, the one that just tickled your fancy. I want to know each and every thought of me, So I can lay back and contemplate bringing them to reality. I want to know that spot That seems to be under so much stress. Because as a body physician, I have the answer - It just needs to be caressed. I want to know if that same spot Was rubbed, licked and kissed, Would your mind ponder On what you could've missed. I want to know what makes you happy, What makes you sad, What makes you sigh And what makes you cry. If I have to take a dive, And explore the ocean floor, I'll find out And bring it back to shore. I want to know, That no matter what we're going through Whether our lives are sunny or blue I want to know - do I have a friend in you? |
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1999
Horace Whitfield
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61 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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BlessingI like your poems. It made to tell someone how much I love him. thanks for that piece.
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wendyI love this poem as it ends with wanting friendship
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anyathis poem was amazing i loved it and i think that you did a very good job on it . I wish that i could write a poem like this oh will. this poem touched me very much.
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LESLIEI LOVE THIS POEM!IT REALLY GOT TO ME WHEN I READ IT. IT SPEAKS NOTHING BUT THE TRUTH!THIS POEM REMINDED ME OF ONE OF THE PERSONS THAT I LOVE SO MUCH THAT I WOULD HATE TO LOSE. GOOD JOB WITH THIS POEM I LOVED IT YOU GOT AN A+ FROM ME.
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melissavery cute. loved it
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JasonGreat! It shares alot of my own feelings about someone. Great work. Loved it.
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JuanI am persuing a special girl. I am serious about her. In my own mind she is the one for me, but she understandably says let's just be friends for now. These words of this poem say what I have been repeating to her for a month, but ineffectively --- at least I think so. But when I read this to her her response was an overwhelming positive. Now I feel I have hope.
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TynetteThis poem was great. I really liked it! Keep up the good work!
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Jessidis poem was amazing, i related to it soo much! 1luv ~*Jessi*~
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LA TASHAI LOVED THE POEM CAUSE IT FIT THE WAY I FEEL ABOUT MY SIGNIFICANT OTHER.
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MickyIts Just has this feeling that you can agree with and feel. I mean it says so much for a short poem. It means so much i can really agree and feel the things in this poem.
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jessicathat poem makes me think of this one person so much i have to say you wrough somthing really great i love it so much
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kI LIKE THIS POEM IT WAS REALLY GOOD IT MADE MY HEART SMILE IT'S SOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE GREAT JOB KEEP THE GOOD WORK UP.
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angelaGreat job that was so good
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DougThis poems explains everything about friendship and lovers! Great poem!
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BrianThis is a great poem. I can feel every word in this peice. I want to tell the creator thank you for putting my feelings into words.
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SerinaI think that this poem is just great. I wanted to send this poem to my guy friend, but I do not think he is ready for this. Horace you did a great job and this poem is outstanding!
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Sha VonThat poem was sweet! The author described wut he/she wanted to with specific details! It was a very nice poem. From a scale through 1 to 10 I give it a 10!
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LeslyI was looking for a poem to send to a special someone I found this one and had to look no further. It broght me to tears thank-you! It's Perfect!
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Sharovery touching and straight to the point
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JenniThis is definately a poem that puts my feelings, which I haven't been able to yet put into words, right into the perfect words. I loved it!
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FannyHola! En verdad I like the poem, it's great..I love it! Take care and i'll read more poem's thans.
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JodiThis poem described how I feel about a very special person.I loved it.
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ChristopherI really liked it. Wonderful :-)
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lucyWords are used to communicate. Knowing how to put words together to express a complete thought is easy to do. But only the best of the best can put thoughts together to express the truth. Poets have a hard job to do, because they have to be sincere in order for their readers to enjoy their poetry. I enjoyed this poem not only because I have experience the feeling, but because it was well written and explained the poets thoughts in detail.
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LaVeniaI really enjoy this poem. Made me moist! :-D No, really. It was very well written.
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Paolaawesome poem..
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Paolaexactly whath i was looking for. It expresses my feeling for a friend/lover.
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lizI really love this poem saying how one feels for the other showing concern to the person you care in your life
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IRVINGThe girl I send out the poem to was very thankful to hear the lines in this poem
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tamaraLOVED IT PRETTY GOOD
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amandagreat poem
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SuelieYour poem was extremely felt. I loved it.
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VijithaTHis is beautiful.It has really helped me express myself..in a way otherwise impossible..
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belindait is amazing how someone can write just the right thing. this is an outstanding poem, tells just what i am feeling toward a newly acquired frinedship. absolutely wonderful.
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RachelThis was such a cute, true poem. Good job Horace!!! HAHAHA!!!
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CliveIt said what need to be said at the present Moment
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eddiethis poem was right to the point and full of feeling
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DawnWonderful poem-- speaks my heart at this time in my life ...Thanx
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DeniseAwsome poem very deep and thoughtful..i love it!
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YolandaThis poem is great and right to the point!
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flexthis poem is a poem that hit close to mke and my freind we both feel like this toward our boyfreinds
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AngelaThis was a beautiful poem.. Everything that i wanted to say but didn't know how. Thank you and keep up the good work.
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nikiathis is the perfect poem of someone truely ginuine that speaks from there heart.
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MyronI think that Horace hit it right on the head, he wasn't striving for all the big words, and wasn't using surrealism, I could indentify with his poem..Thanks
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DarkI really enjoyed this poem it put some of my own feelings into words. Well Done.
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maryit fit my situation perfectly thank you
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CHRISTINEit said just the things .
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anniebeautiful
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leandrei love that poem it touch my heart i want to have the talent you have to touch someone heart as deep as that touch mines if you can help me email me back. But you are good damn good and thanks for letting me read that.
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JulieA great poem, I recently sent it to a friend that I have deeper feelings for and he really loved it. It had all the things I wanted to say to him but could never have got across in a million years!!! Thankyou!!
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Michelebrilliant
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ginathis poem touched my heart&soul,because there's someone i've never met, has come into my life. i already want to know these things about her.
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CameronThis is one of the most touching poems that I have ever read. It's very moving and it taps at your soul, it makes you feel so warm.
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daisythis poem was just what i wanted to say to a dear friend....it was perfect!!! : p
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PaulaI loved this poem, it was exactly what I was looking for to send to my new boyfriend. It expresses exactly what I want to ask him. Thank you for the use of your beautiful words. Paula
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Nikeei love this poem! U did a wonderful job writing it.
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JeanYou have no idea how this poem relates to me. I am in a position that I never knew exactly how to react to and now I do, Thank's to you.
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LindaI love this poem I have it posted on my wall at work. It is very powerful. Good job.
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DanicaExcellent poem. It expresses every thought I could have about my friend. I look forward to seeing more from you.
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JAIGREAT POEM! I LOVED IT!
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