Thoughts Of You by Travis

#29 Thoughts Of You

Have you ever wanted someone so much that they were constantly on your mind? Consumed your thoughts night and day? This poem is about someone that I have wanted for a long time. Someone who is quite unreachable, just like the stars in the sky.

This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Erotic Poems

Thoughts Of You

by Travis

How many times have I thought of you
And the many things I’d like to do.
I sleep at night with you on my mind,
One night with you, would be just fine.

Your white robe is what I see,
I wonder, wonder, how it would be.
If I could touch your lips with mine,
The thought of this is so divine.

I want to see you without that robe,
Your body to touch, caress, and probe.
I’d lay you down, your body to admire,
One look at you, sets my soul on fire.

I want to feel you, touch, and kiss,
send you into . . . . heavenly bliss,
I want you, need you, feel my desire,
Me inside you, I would never tire.

I could make love to you all night long,
It would feel so good, it couldn’t be wrong,
These are my thoughts, what I fantasize,
You’re all too perfect in this man’s eyes.

96 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

Micki

great poem
Kacee

I love this poem! It Rocks!
Ashley

This is probably the only poem I've come across and have been completely speechless. Your words are really strong and I got excited just by reading it. I loved it. Good job.
Don

Two thumbs up. five stars
Alexis

When I read this poem, I could feel what the author felt for this woman. I could feel the desire in his words. I thought it was a wonderful poem.
Holly

I could feel the desire in these words. wishing it was me it was writen for.
Taylor

as a girl who just feel in love i have wanted this person for so long and this poem is just perfect at this moment i loved it keeepp it up
PETRA

this is very nice :-)
Mel

This hits home. To wonder what it would b like to spend just one night with the one u luv and want so bad. And it could never b. Keep up the good work Travis.
fade

very beautiful poem and it touches the soul.
VICTORIA

I LOVE IT, IT GIVE YOU SOMETHING TO THINK ABOUT. IT MAKES YOU WANT TO GET READY FOR THAT MOMENT. WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE FROM YOU.
Hisham

thank you for this poem. i know the feelings exactly. human spirit and passions go side by side. this poem has touched my heart in a way. it reflected like a mirror what i feel about my special woman. thank you again for this poem.
B

Hi, Just Wanted To Let U Know That I really Liked This Poem. its Hard To Find A Poem That Really Get Your Attention But This One Is One Of A Kind If I May Say So My Self. P'z SL33PY
MILLER

I LOVE ALL OF THE LOVE POEMS. THERE JUST RIGHT FOR ME. IT REMINDS ME OF MY SPECIAL LOVE : RICKY
De'Voria

i really like this poem my boyfriend actually sent it to me for me to read b/c that what he thought about me and i really like your poems i actually feel good and tingly but i just wanted to show you some love about you poem! holla
kyle

Travis that was a good poem
shila

i think your peom was great i would give you five star's if it was up to me.
Laydee

that poem was an excellent way to put everything,i love poem and u need to keep writing so we can keep reading. keep up the GREAT work.
Liz

All I can say to that is ROCK ON!
Lauren

I really loved this poem mann keep doin what you are doin it was lovely!
sherrilee

wow! that poem is beautiful travis who ever you are wow i wish i was that girl!
Zack

That was very deep. i feel the same way about the girl i dream of
abbas

Just wondeful!
demetria

good I relly like it and it's not because it's the 100 best vote
John

This was very nice. Interesting from a man's perspective.
dawn

I think this is a awesome poem
mitchell

This poem is very good. I sent it to someone special and he loves it. It is straight and right to the point.
whitney

Travis your poem was really good it was sweet and very romantic keep up the good work and I'll be looking to see somemore of your poems on here
stacy

I just loved your poem. It flowed lightly/lightheartedly on one level but simultaneously struck a deeper cord as well
ricardo

excellent travis! it relates to my current situation, me and my woman is distance apart and i'm really longing for her presence. keep up the good work!
Kara

i thought this was a good poem and i wish i could write like that.
Ashley

Travis that was great I heard it the other day when my boyfriend read it to me. he told me he got it off line so I came to see if there were any others like it. keep up the good work.
g

over all its a 7 out of 10!
Beth

God,this poem is beautiful,I love someone who I will never get to see,or hold.We Talk everyday,all night long.It brought tears to my eyes.I love it
Charity

It is a very sexy poem, I felt evey word.
CANNY

I LOVE THIS POEM.THIS IS THE BEST POEM EVER.I AM FROM THE BAHAMAS AND I WILL SEND THIS TO MY FRIENDS!
Allen

Great work. I've not only been there before, but am now, and unfortunately, am not even noticed. But this one makes me remember what love is.
Donnatella

Fantasy can do all kinds of things to the mind. I have been in this position before, and I was fortunate enough to have it come true. Hope you reach you destination. You go, poet.
carol

Really liked the last line!
Anton

A GREAT POEM! i WILL SEND IT TO A PERSON i LOVE IMMEDIATELY, THANKS TRAVIS
Ashli

I am going through the same situation, but the kid i think about likes me to death but i can neva see him b/c he is always working or im out. I HATE IT
Jodi

Magnificent!! Lovely expression
kuk

wonderful poem. Good use of imagery.
Laila

What can i say but beautiful
Brenda

Bravo! Wonderfully written!
Britt

Very Good! I like It!
Marion

This poem sent shivers all through my body... extreamly good job.
cristiano

I LOVE IT
Samantha

This poem is really good. It is nice to see a guy have such a yearning for a girl that he can't think of anyone but her. Most of the time it is the other way around.
NATASHA

I AM GOING THUR THAT SAME SITUATION RIGHT NOW
mark

geez, its great...how words just flow.......
Pam

I really liked this poem it was very sweet!
Kia

I really like this poem very much, keep up the good work.
gareth

bloody good
becky

THIS POEM IS VERY WONDERFUL IT WAS REALLY BEATIFUL KEEP IT UP :}
catherine

This was wonderful. The best poem so far. You have my vote.
Gemini

Got me open, not easy to do. Good poem.
Larry

A mimic of my thoughts
Donovan

Nice thoughts...a little sing songy
renee

too hot to touch. rrrrrrrrrr
Andrea

This was beautiful. I understand where you are coming from; loving someone who is glorious and unattainable. The simplicity of the way you stated your feelings was beutiful in itself. Keep up th e good work.
Mike

I met this girl and then we both had to go away for 4 weeks, in different directions. THis poem means so much to be. The perfect poem. Very very well done.
Heather

Very Very nice. Left me quite...Well never mind how it left me. It was just REALLY GOOD!!!!!! Heather
nina

beautiful poem with REAL feelings
warren

keep it up!!!!
Renee

A perfect 10. If only a man would write that about me. Can't wait to read more of your work.
Rachel

This is a very good poem, I enjoyed it cuz it is real and you are speaking what you truely feel inside.
daniellle

this poem was great, iwish for more mn out there like you!
Lark

Very, very ,nice,Dear Travis.
trey

Loved it..
Jeff

Tasteful and simple, yet firey and suggestive -- well done mr travis
Rod

Every lovers must read this poem... This poem can make u feel good (in love).
Terry

A very special friend sent this poem to me. I found it very beautiful and moving.
cassie

wish i knew someone that thought as much of me as you do for her i lied very much
zac

great poem man
Melissa

This poem gave me goosebumps! Excellent work with so much feeling. I absolutely loved it.
Josh

I Think This pome is ver nice I liked it alot
ken

really concise and focused
Jackie

I L O V E IT
Kevin

I love this poem! It makes me think of and passionately remember my wife back in the states! I sent it to her also. Thank you
David

Beautiful, subtly erotic but oozing with love.
Lynda

This is poem if very beautiful and very well written from his heart..It touched me where I have been..and where so many others are or will be
JAMIE

Excellent poem! Full of so much passion & desire! Very well writen! I loved it!
Nan

This is such a descriptive poem. You could actually feel the words.
dorothy

you write some awesome poetry it will really make a person think
Jason

This poem was unreal, it was true. no lies, life as we know it not as we want it....... just one mans oppinion but it was amazingly written.... Bravo
Miss

EXCELLENT POEM....
Patsy

I liked this poem very much! It says what you want but doesn't go over board!
dmaldo1012

On the money, my man. On the money.
amy

great work turned me on
Dorinda

Very nicely written
Carey

You go boy! :)
Salee

i really liked this poem and thought it was nice so i did send it to someone and i thought the author really probably put effort in it and did a good job.
J.D

Man u held it down on that poem , it was quite awesome, it left me in awwww
TERESA

i really liked your poem for i am a poem writer to and i enjuy readind others that are good for i fount yours to be very good
Doug

Poem is excellent, just what I was looking for

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