#6 Missing You
Thoughts of missing my fiancée. Gladly, I won't be missing her much longer, for she'll soon be moving here! Maybe you have experienced similar thoughts of missing someone.
This poem originally was published in Love Poems
Missing You
My heart aches within from missing you, My lips long for the feel of kissing you, Right now all I need is to gently touch your skin, To look into your eyes and see deep within, Just one warm embrace, Just to look upon your face, Just one little touch, From the one I love so much, If I could gaze upon your smile, For just a little while, To know that you miss me too, As I'm thinking of you, To hear the sound of you breathe, Knowing you'll never leave, To see you walk up to me, Then embrace you tenderly, To just be with the one who's sent my heart reeling, And brought about this downpour of emotion and feeling, I sit here alone in my office tonight, And pray that somehow this all turns out right, I've never been one to do more taking than giving, I'm not well off but I work hard for a living, I've told you many thoughts that weren't borrowed or bought, And in lifetime, who would have thought, That I have found someone who was just meant for me, I can't explain the magic or why this should be, But there is one thing that I know for certain, That this just ain't over till one of us draws the final curtain, For I've seen an angel and I want you to know, If it's my choice to make, I'll never let you go, Don't know what life holds, maybe there's no reason or rhyme, To think you may be mine in a matter of time, And though I cannot touch you and we are now apart, My Love, you do dwell, so deep within my heart. |
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1999
John Seabrook
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164 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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A MLoved it. simply loved it!
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MiraThat was a lovely poem I really enjoyed it. It made me cry because I can relate.
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AngelThis poem is awesome rite now im missing somone alot and cant wait to this person is officailly mine
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LizAWESOME poem! Made me think about my Soldier overseas! :)
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KellyMade sweet memories come back
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Clairethis was really good . if I could tell my bf how much I really do Miss him then I would use that peom . exept for some of the things . any time please any one if u have a peom or some thing talk to me too please I would love to see more! I love you all,lol
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ChristinaOn a one to ten scale I would have to give it a ten. I really understand where he is coming from I hardly ever get to see my husband because he is a truck driver. This poem makes me think of him and wish he were here. John thank you so much for sharing it.
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Brandonthis poem is so amazing, i can feel what the other 18 yr old girl tabitha said with her guy going on service as my girlfriend is in the airforce and is away now flying the SU-32s so i know what its like to wake up alone and not to have her there to kiss good night and wake to her in the morning with a kiss. brandon
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JAMIEI LOVED IT IT MADE ME CRY MY HUSBAND IS AWAY RIGHT NOW AND I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS POEM ITS TRULY BEAUTIFUL. JAMIE
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stacythis is a wonderful poem, i've recently split from my boyfriend of seven years over something silly really & this really explains how i'm feeling i've sent this by text to let him know how much he means to me, i just hope it works & he comes back x
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lil angeli think this a really good way to miss sumone that u really love n tell that person that u love them each day n tell them that nothing well ever go wrong. N if this is really ment 2 be. ! Native Pride $ life (((by lil angel)) stay up
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JamesI really enjoyed this poem for the sake that it fits perfectly with the situation that I am currently in. I am a military member that is stationed away from my family. I will be gone for a year before I get to see and hold them again and this poem was able to show my wife and children how i felt in so many ways. Thank you so much.
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WaveneyI love this poem because it describes me and my fiance. He's in NY and I somewhere elsebut I know our love is strong and can withstand anything. Also it calms my spirit when i get fustrated.
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MELI love this poem. it made me cry as im missing my boyfriend.
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CoryThis poem has touched me deeply, I am only 18yrs. old but i am in love with a woman who is almost always spending time away and this poem fits perfect! On a scale from 1-10 its definatley a 10 because I want to share my feelings with her and diddn't know how until I saw this poem thanks.
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MandieThis poem Is perfect! I love it, My Fiance is in the Army and I miss him so much, this poem explains all my feeling. Thank you, it's beautiful!
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Debora#1 Deb I enjoyed this poem, I have a boyfriend that has been missing for about 6 months. No clues to where he is. If you have similiar poems I would like to read them. Thanks
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leahI love this poem soooo much. My fiance has been in jail for the past month for something that he didnt do. We dont know when he is going to get out. I miss him more than anything. We have a 9 month old daughter that he is missing out on watching her learn and grow. This poem really hit home when i read it. Thank You.
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Lisathis poem is brill! i could neva think of something as good as that and it touched me as my boy lives away.
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shadreckathat was the most loving poems i have read in a long time me and my boyfriend are not talking and me noy knowinf wht it is this way put thanks to you me and him are know one again thank you fan shadrecka suggs
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LinJust summed up my feelings perfectly.
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MoonHello My Friend I am so thirsty for such these words. I seem that this is written about my life. I am trying to remebr my past love this poem is so good, i really appreciate this. So nice and so good, God Bless u always and be happy and be simple always bye Happy X Mas Your Own Moon
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JulieBeautiful! I've been there.
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LisaI too am engaged to some one who is far away. Because of work he had to relocate in May 2006, I will be joining him in June 2007. We talk on the phone every night and visit once a month, but the distance is so hard to deal with. This poem really hit home for me and touched my heart. I read it to him on the phone and could hear him choking back the tears. Thank you for touching our hearts.
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laurathat was beautiful! very nice, i know just what you are talking about and i'm glad your fiancee is moving in with you. i wish you much happiness and thank you for sharing your poem with us all.
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ChristineSO full of emotion! And every word fits to a t!
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Kassii especially liked this poem because i my boyfriend is a marine stationed in North Carolina. i dont get to see him too much and i miss him terribly. he is being deployed to Iraq again for the 3rd time and this poem really hits home.
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steveWonderful poem. just what i was feeling right now about my frend. And the best thing is i am also sitting in my office and thinking abt her.
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Tara-LeeI just have to say that that was a very touching and wonderful poem. :)
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ElenaI sent the author a personal email too. I truly know how he feels. Me and my fiance do not live in the same state and I'll be moving to where he lives come Jan of '07. I find it very beautiful and heartfelt. Much kuddos to this author!
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JemmaI read this poem and it is absolutley beautiful and so brilliant. i understood exactly what he means. It hit me very close to my heart.
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Maria E. i really love this poem. My love ,Anthony send it to me . i live in greece and i trully miss him .
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erlizhi. such composition would exactly tell how a person misses someone they love. more poems for us! more power
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julieI like this poem cause it reminds me of my feeling about my boyfriend when he leeves for work for 2 weeks or 3 weeks
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RagglySimply loved it,I thought I was the only one to feel that pain,I think we all think that,that It's only our hurt. It was nice to know and read that we all feel the same things and that helps. Thank you for this. *S
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charleneI LOVE THIS POEM IT MAID ME CRY
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elsaI love this poem. it reminds me so much of me and my fiancee. I mean it's hard being away from him because he's in the military and I miss him way too much. But soon we'll be together and I'll get to hold him in my arms. I love you, baby.
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VJHave been looking for a specific poem to describe how I feel about my boyfriend having to move away for 2. 5 years. I found this poem and it is perfect. So good to know others are experiencing the same pain - this poem describes this so well. God it hurts, but I know we can get through this. I love you sexy, and always will. Counting down the days to our next visit xxx
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AmandaThis is by far the best I've read, I vote 10
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GrahamThis is a fantastic poem. I sent to my girlfriend as im living abroad right now. It says everything i feel for her. One of the best poems i've ever read!
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Amanda2 Weeks ago the man i love with all my heart left. There was a big fight and i havent seen him since. This poem fits right down to the t.
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davidthis is the best poem i have read in years, thank you to the writer for this poem.
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CHASITYThis poem really hits right to my heart. I have a good friend who I am very much in love with, but because of his job,things wouldn't work out. He is a contractor fo rthe government and travels constantly. When I do see him, we are like 2 little kids in love. The poem is great!
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HannaThis poem is very thoyght out. This poem is the exact words i need to tell my special friend how i feel about him. Hope to come across another with with the above name on it.
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Elizabethmy husband is a navy seal, he's always gone to unknown places. this poem helps. thank you.
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gemmai was looking for a missing you poem for both of my sisters who had passed away when they were both very young and your is the best one i have ever seen and it describes everything i feel and do so thank you very much tthey will really like this poem i am putting on headstone
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LizThis is the best poem I have read in my life!
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HeatherWow, I never could put into words how much I missed my other half being so far away. This poem said it all.
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kThank you for writing this poem. It expresses exactly how I feel right now. A month ago I was torn apart from the man I love. It has been very hard for both of us, but he is in my thoughts and prayers daily. I'm glad you were able to put words to my feelings and to many others I'm sure. Thank you!
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IMissJustinThis poem really touched me. It explains exactly how I feel. My fiance was arrested this morning at about 9. We were suppose to get married today at five. He was arrested for something he didn't do. And I know everyone says that but it's true with us. We even have lots of evidence that he didn't do anything. His pyscho ex-girlfriend caused all of this. She called us and told us she'd stop the wedding even if she had to lie to his PO(he was in jail for 8 months and on probation for something she made up last year and he just got out in Feb. but he beat that case and just had probation) to get him arrested. And that's exactly what she did. This is really hard for me. Hes in there until at least June 9th, when he has court. His bond is $50,000 and the bondsman told me he would take $2,500 for a down payment. I really wish I had that money so he could get out. I can't eat, I can't sleep and I miss him so much. This poem describes exactly how I feel and I hope you don't mind but I'm sending this poem to him. This poem is awesome and I love it! Great Job on it! And thank you.
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juliethis poem means alot to me because i am in love with a boy and he has went to jail he will probabley be there for a while and i don't think there is no way i can see him and i want him to know that i miss him very much and i hope he misses me.
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sandii love the poem
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Shaquillayes!this poem touch me i just got of an relationship and i miss him so much and i feel the same only if i could see him hold him kiss him plus ilove poems
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DENISETHIS REALLY TOUCHED ME.
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gretcheni found that this poem not only touched the heart but the soul because i no at one period of time everyone has lost someone nearest and dearest to them. my regards to you and i hope you live on the way she would like you to do so . ps i lost my father when i waz only 2 and right now he inspires me to write poetry and im 16 years old right now. pleeze use poetry as your other voice to express your inner most thoughts and desires dont be afraid of the pen and give it the blood it needs to feel the words. your admirer gretchen aka passion
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Lillieit was a great poem and it really touched my heart
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Danielthis Poem makes so much sence. as soon as I read it, I new it was perfect to send to my girlfriend. we have been apart for quit some time.
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Stacy-bethI loved this poem. I couldn't find a better poem about how I'm feeling about my boyfriend. He's been gone for about two months and I can't wait for him to get home. Thank you for writing such an amazing poem.
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TonyGreat poem, one that is very much fitting to my current situation.
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ifrayour poem touched my heart. please send me more poems that you write. send me one of your picture.
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feliciathis was one of the most emoitonal peoms i have ever read it makes me think of my boyfriends that i was dating for 4years and three days before we was suppose to get married he got kill in a car wreck
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madzthis poems is ever so sweet it honestly touches me this is all wot i feel for the boy of my dreams thnkyou very much !
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BrendaThis poem has the words that I need to express my love to my husband. Sometimes you just can't find the right words to say. Thank you for all the beautiful poems you write.
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NOMUSAI REALY RELATE TO THIS POEM BECAUSE I AM IN A SIMILAR SITUATION, I THINK THE WRITER DID WELL AND EXPRESED WHAT EVERY PERSON WHO IS IN A LONG DISTANCE RELATIONSHIP FELLS.
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Rogelio SrIt was real!
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TabbithaI love this poem it sits deep within my heart im 18 years old and my fiance just left for overseas. He is the onle person for me and i feel the sadness of missing him deeply everytime i wake up. I also write poetry and send it overseas to him and he tells me he cries because its so beautiful. You write beautiful poetry. I love my soldier very much.
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KristineI love the poem. I was touch by its words. I will send this to my boyfriend. I'm sure he will love it. Thanks a lot :)
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katethis poem touched my and said what i couldn't say.
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DJThis poem is great. It really touched me in so many ways. It reminds me of me and my boyfriend. We live in two different states, 5 hours apart. So we never get to see eachother. This poem explains exactly how we both feel about each other. I will be going to where he lives this May and hopefully moving there with him and his three children. I Love him so much and and it kills us both being so far apart. Again this is a great poem. Keep up the good work! :-)
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KellyThis poem brought tears to my eyes! My boyfriend is away in the army and I miss him so very much. This poem touched me because its how I feel!
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akashit expalins what i fell.
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Deanthis poem touched me and is very beautiful i am a big of poetry this poem hit my heart and made me realise that life is short and that the 1 is out there somewhere thank you
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JenniferI really loved this poem and cannot wait to send it to my husband who is incarcerated. It really touched me so much that it brought tears to my eyes.
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soniaI LOVE THIS POEM BECAUSE I AM IN A SIMILAR SITUATION . THE PERSON I LOVE ALOT IS AWAY FROM ME , AND HAS BEEN AWAY FROM ME FOR ALOMST TWO YEARS. HE'S IN IRAQ AND I'M SCARED DAY AND NIGT OF LOOSING HIM . I WISH JUST ONCE I COULD SEE HIM AND TALK TO HIM PERSONALY . OH I WISH . BUT I WILL SEND HIM THIS POEM IT HAS REALLY TOUCHED MY HEART IN MANY WAYS AND I'M SURE HE WILL LOVE IT AS WELL . I DIDN'T REALLY LIKE POETRY UNILL I FELT THE PAIN OF LOVE . I'M SURE FOR ALL THE LOVED ONES OUT THERE , THEY WILL LOVE IT AS WELL .
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DavidI wrote this poem to my love and hid it in her hand baggage when she left today for cardiff. I love u tasha!
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VeliciaThis is one of the most beautiful poems I have read in a long time. I loved it. It said everything I was feeling, but couldnt put into words.
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KimberlyIf ever there was a poem that said exactly what I was feeling about a love that was so far away from me then this would be it. I appreciate the how sincerely honest this poem is. I think it explains exactly what one is feeling when they are missing someone. Great job!
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Leahbeautifully written, if any of us has ever had a love leave for even a little while, I'm sure they have felt this way I know I have. It is a song that our hearts sing when or love has left us longing.
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TerionI was just searching for a 'missing you' poem and clicked on two links and yours were the 2nd one. I have to say it was right on que. From beginning to end is what I would've love to creatively put in words for the guy I'm mailing this to. But either way, all that matters is that he knows how I feel and although I didn't write, I hope he takes & believes it just the same. Beautiful poem and I hope your fiancee' enjoyed it just as much as I. Thanks.
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adenaA+
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MeganI was truely touched by the poem for your fiancee. I know how you feel. The one I love isnt here with me either and im missing him soo much. Im counting down the days until I can see him again. Please keep writing more poems about this. they are truely magical and very inspiring.
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ZulmaWOW! This Poem really touched me. I felt every word like i wrote it.
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michelleI love this poem it really summed up what I was going through right now. thanks.
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NanyHey John Seabrook How are you? iam not fine. Coz iam missing my husband. I find this poem and my tears come . u wonna know why? because i miss my husband like that and much more as words cant explain. we married. but hade to leave. He is Doktor in egypt and i have my uni in germany. so we have to spent along time apart. till i have time again to come to him. this take alot of power from me. give me alot of sadness. and have the feeling i get crazy. Normaly i wanted to write an poem than i get the page of you. thx for this poem iam sure u have ur reason why u wrote it. i wish nobody a situation like i have of missing. its sooo hard.
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brittanyTHIS POEM WAS WONDERFUL, IT BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES BECAUSE I CAN RELATE TO IT . WHILE READING MISSING YOU IT FELT AS THOUGH I HAD WRITTEN IT MY SELF I AM RIGHT NOW IN A VERY SIMILIAR SPOT BECAUSE I HAVE BEEN TORN AWAY FROM THE MAN I LOVE BUT, HOPEFULLY NOT FOR LONG ANDAS YOUR POEM SAYS UNTIL I SEE HIS SMILE AND GET TO TOUCH HIM AGAIN I WILL BE THINKING OF HIM. TO WRAP IT UP I JUST WANTED TO SAY I LOVED THIS POEM.
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LaceyToday is the 1 year mark for my boy friend and I. He is currently on a mission for my church which lasts 2 years. He has been gone for 2 months now and I miss him terribly. I read this poem and I could relate and I just wanted to say thank you to the author.
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bekkii know what it feels like been apart from a loved one as my fiance is currently in prison serving a 7 year sentence. everything in the poem was true about how a person can feel been separated from their other half. this was a pleasure to read and i really really enjoyed it! lets have more poems like this in the future! thank u.
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JessicaThis poem touched my heart in ways noone will really ever understand. The love of my life is 3,000 miles away from me, and this poem put every single one of my feelings into words. Amazing.
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wahdahThis poem is the greatest poem i have evr read. Who ever wrote this desevers to be a millionar. I love this poem it goes with my life and the way that i am feeling. I give so much love to who ever wrote this.
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garryit brought my mum and dad back 2gether
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KaraI give this poem a 9 it really touched home and i like it alot
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ReneeThis poem is amazing! It really shows soo much emotion. I think that everyone has felt this way at least once in their life. Keep up the good work!
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JoanneIt is everything I feel for my lost love and I would love to tell him if he would only talk to me. He has left me and will not even talk to me ever again for the harsh words I said to him as he was leaving and now I long to be with him forever.
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Tomthis poem touched me becuase my girlfriend and i have been seperated for five months now. just the other night we talked and decided that we really were meant to be. the words used in this poem are the same words that i feel . thank you for reading my mind.
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JamieI loved the poem it touched my heart in so many ways!
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EveThis poem is very nice!
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mariskaIt was a good poem ie tell how you love someone.
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ANGELAYOU REALLY SAID IT LIKE IT WAS I REALLY DID LIKE YOUR POEM
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MarthaI have never read a poem quite like that before. In my opinion it voices everything that one person could possibly want to express towards a loved one that they are missing! It was possibly the sweetest poem I've ever read!
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KaitlinI loved this poem, because recently, my boyfriend Nate has gone to Canada for a few months and I miss him so much because I havent spent much time apart since we've been together.
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ArthurThis poem is amazing. Just reading it you can tell that the author is truely lonely. Being in the military and stationed overseas i couldn't agree more with the message that this poem portrays. Thank you for sharing your poem with everyone. and i hope everything works out when your fiance gets there
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JaimeI loved this poem. I am only 13 but i found someone i want to spend the rest of my life with. I live in oklahoma but i'm moving to colorado in one week nand my heart is broken causer i can only see his face every 4 months. and this is how i will feel when i leave like if i could just touch his finger that would be enough cause i love him.
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StevenThis is a fantastic poem! 10/10. It has made me miss my Girlfriend even more then I thought I was already was. I haven't seen or had contact with here since Tuesday (today being Friday) and won't be until tomorrow. All of the lines have strong connections with the two of us. I intend on reading it out to her tomorrow night when I join back up with her. I know she'll melt. I also know it's perfect for the two of us to think about how much we mean to each other! Thank you!
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TainaThis Poem Hit Real Close To Home About How I Feel. As My Fiancee Is Not Able To Be With Me Right Now For Personal Reasons! This Poem Is EXCELLENT! Thanks For Sharing this, Would Like To see More Of His Work:-)
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AmyThis poem has special meaning for me. I am currently involved in a long distance relationship, and we are also engaged, just as the author when he wrote this poem. We've had times when we feel like it is all hopeless, and would never work out. To me, this poem says exactly what I couldn't say, and gives me one more reason to hang in there, and believe that my fiancee and I will be together in the end.
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KimI love this poem. I like this guy so much but he has a gf already.
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AmberTHIS POEM IS SO BEAUTIFUL! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! GOD BLESS YOU!
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SoniaI liked your poem it touched me so much just to the recently breakup i hade and your poem explained all the feelings i still and will always have for him good job!
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amandai think u did such a grate job on this poem keep up the good work cant wait to see more work like this one i have just read
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LoriThis poen touched me more than I can say. My tears fell like slow rain drops, not the slobering cry, but that of a cry with meaning that I can't explain. Although your explaination of the meaning of this poem to you, is the total opposite for me. (You are waiting on the one you love to join you, I am mourning the loss of one. ) I just recently (about 3 months ago) went through a breakupof a relationship, with a man that is still my best friend. We had issues that caused this, although I beleive they can be worked through eventually. We still have almost daily contact and he is wonderful to my 15 & 16 year old daughters. (He loves them like his own) I had to comment because there has never been a poem that has touched me in the way that this one has. Beautiful writing and I THANK YOU!
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White RoseFirst time I've read this poem was two years and seven months ago, that was the first time I've met the love of my life. The poem itself does symbolize a BEAUTIFUL LOVE which created by two people who are truly in love to one another. This poem inspires broken hearted people, and of course the ones who aren't, to keep falling in love until they find the right person for them. Thank you for this poem, it does explain the beauty of love. Through this poem, I really want my sweetie to know, I'm his forever and I love him always and forever. Thank you!
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KrystinaI loved your poem! My heart aches while I am away from my love. and you seemed to put my feelings into words that I could never find. It was awesome! Thanks!
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JohnThank you all for your comments! WOW I just got an email in on this poem and didn't know all these comments were on here. When the email comes in it doesn't show the comments. I didn't realize you had to click on the link to get to it. HEHE Now I know how to get here, the computer whiz that I am. John Seabrook
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JessicaThat poem is great. it brings tears in my eyes.
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NigelI really loved the the emotions and thoughts expressed in these beautiful words. They very much struck a chord with my own circumstances - a difficult situation where the woman I love so very much, and who loves me, isn't yet free to be with me. I hope and pray that this will change in 2004. Until then "Keep the faith baby!"
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AudraWhen i frist read this i started crying. This poem is the perfect poem to send to my boyfriend down in Flordia. Its a great poem and one of the very best:)
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nikkinice poem very pretty
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GailThank you for the wonderful poem
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jamiei can really relate to this poem i think it is well written
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WayneI think this poem is 1 of the best I have read in a while coming from a guy & his true feelings of 1 that he loves so much. If alot of guys where like this 1 as I am a guy as well would be such a better place for us rare guys who get treated & measured up to other guys. Well done poem though & hope you a great marriage.
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allisonthis is a great poem. my boyfriend moved to Medferd and i think he is so the one and when i read this i thought of him in an instant and how much i miss him and he means to me. this is an awsome poem
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RoseMy fiance' moved 2 hours away to find a better job and this poem summed all my feelings up. I miss him so much and i thank god for bringing him into my life. Thank you John Seabrook for the wonderful words you put into that poem.
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JohnThank you ALL for your wonderful comments! John Seabrook
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malomg! that just reminds me of my boyfriend. he has been gone for like 6 months and i miss him so much! i love u jay!
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JackieOh my gosh this is a wonderful, beautiful and a very true poem. When I read this poem it brought tease to my eyes. This poem make you think that for sure. Great Job.
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ANGIWOW! THAT WAS SO TOUCHING THAT I HADTO SEND IT TO SOMEONE IN MY LIFE THAT I LOVE VERY MUCH. YOU DEFFINATLY KNOW HOW TO HELP SOMEONE PUT INTO WORDS HOW MUCH SOMEONE MEANS TO THEM. THANK YOU! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
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amberthis poem is filled with love for one another. and how much a person can miss another. My brother is in jail and this poem made me think of him. he made mt world great then when he left. he took alot away from me. so thats why i like this poem.
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stephaniethis poem is great. My boyfriend and I broke up last week and this is exactly how i am feeling i miss him so much words can't explain.
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Partonoh my gosh this poem brought tears to my eyes. My Fiance is moving away like 5 hrs away and we have been together for 15 months this is exactly how i feel. i love him very much
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MariaI just wanted to say your poems are so deep. I love your poems very much. I'm really into poems about love and missing people. I get really caught up in the moment. Once again, your poems are wonderful. you should keep it up. Thank you for your time.
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annei am in the same position as the author and his words summed it all up
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ashoh gosh, how'd u know that this is what i was thinkin? lol my boyfriend is in the army, away at bootcamp right now and how i love him and miss him so, so just thanks writing this
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sholathis was so heart felt for me, my boyfriend is in australia at the moment,wont see him till october. this poems fits exactly how i feel for him, it made me cry. its great!
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TheThank you is all I cansay. Thank you.
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LeslieOh Gosh! I really loved this poem. I thought it was the perfect thing to send my boyfriend. I described prefectly how I feel. It was a beautiful poem.
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RikkiOh MY! that is exactly what I am going through right now. Beautiful poem! You took the all the feelings I am having and made a poem. It made me feel you where reading my mind. LOL!
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tiaWow! Great poem. My b/f is in jail currently and has been for almost 3 years. And it'll be almost 4 more months. And it really explains our feelings.
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jackiewow, i am at a loss for words almost. I am going through the same thing right now. I read this poem and it actually made me cry. It was exactly what i am feeling right now for my finace. Thanks!
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MeganI loved this poem plus the fact that I can relate
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chrisWow I was amazed at this ! This poem describes the love my girlfriend and I have for each other Although we are more than 5 hours apart! Great work keep it up
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kellywow, my boys in boot camp too in Missouri, this poem describes exactly how i feel, i linger on every letter written and dream about his hugs :) thanks
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EuniceThis poem is a excellent poems. Nothing more need to be said. A job well done.
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courtneyi love it.my b\f is 17 and he just moved 20 hrs away from me..i'm 15.and we are trying..wish us luck
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lucywow.. this poem brought a tear to my eye as my lover just moved away.. this is exactly how i'm feeling.. thank you
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JessieThis is such a GREAT poem!..It's the perfect poem I've been looking for to send my boyfriend(who is at boot camp in San Diego, California-for 3 months).It expresses everything I feel.Keep up the GOOD work!
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JeffIt says what I've been feeling.
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DanielaI love your poem, I can basically relate, Iknow how it feels missing the one you love with all your heart!
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erikthis is a very beautiful poem
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ChristinI thought this poem was great. This is exactly how I feel because my boyfriend is off at college in Chicago and I am 3 1/2 hours away. We only get to see eachother like every three weeks.and let me tell you that isn't much at all because when we see eachother it's on the weekends which is only a few days.Thank you for this poem.I'm going to print it out and send it to him.
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taravery great poem!!!!!!
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HANISAHUVE JUST INSPIRED ME...I WAS PLANNING TO WRITE A POEM TO MY LOVER WHO IS SO FAR AWAY FROM ME...AND DO NOT KNOW WHERE TO START...NOW I HAVE READ URES....I THINK IM READY TO WRITE THAT POEM...THANKYOU!
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Duaneloneliness...can tell...how much we love a person...its the love that moves and dictates our minds ...sometimes we cant explain how we wrote a letter or a poem that is so real and meaningfull like one of yours...John...THANKS
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BillI really enjoy reading your poem, and I´m sending it to my American wife who is currently teaching in Texas. I live in Brazil, I´m a Brazilian national and I´tried to convey my feelings through poetry to my wife. Poetry is something so personal, and so culture interlaced and dependent, that my Portuguese poetry did not find my wive´s heart. I hope that your poetry will be better understood by her. Bill
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markim touched.
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davidThis poem is the best!!it has so many points!!i love it
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leiai think that this poem is just what i needed to face reality at the right time to understand that my love is not here but within my reach at any givin time thanks so much
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GinoThis poem was great. It describes a situation i am having with my girlfriend very well. Keep on writing!
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MikeTwo lovers apart appreciate verse like this one :-))
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DianeThank you, I have the same feeling missing my man from 3,000 miles away. We will not be together for Valentine's Day and I have found the perfect Poem because of you John, Thank you for sharing your thoughts
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NASIRTHIS IS A EXCELLENT POEM IT IS VERY TOUCHING I SENT IT TO MY GIRL AND SHE LOVED IT KEEP UP THE PERFECT WORK
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BrendonA poem that is yet so real in my life at the moment.
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becthis is a really good poem i really like it.
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JoeyI feel what you are feeling cause i myself am going through the same and after reading this poem made miss my girl even more.very good poem.....
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