Wet by Kate J.

#53 Wet

This poem was written while caught in the rain, realizing just how important a part "wet" has been in my life.

This poem originally was published in Love Poems - Erotic Poems

Wet

by Kate J.

Languidly parting the moist curtain.
he slides into the smooth vessel.
the color of fire pink velvet.
his large hands securely wielding the creamy white handles,
firmly manipulating them until
just a trickle of foamy liquid flows forth.

She faces him, their eyes, reflecting pools of love,
lock on each other. embracing, both, with body and soul,
they melt together in the steamy atmosphere.
memories flood as her neck arches and wet kisses cover her throat.
teasing one another in the aquamarine Caribbean ocean.
causing rough ripples to fan out across the water of a swimming pool
as
they
played.
discovering new things as a soft summer rain, like the sound of a
tinkling
xylophone, soaked them.

Aromas of citrus, colognes and faintly, the sea
drift and swirl around them.
skin drenched, rivulets of salty sweat stream between them.
sauna heat builds as temperatures rise.
flesh moves with synchronized, frantic fluidity.
a torrential river violently rushes into a cascading waterfall.
drowning in a frenzied whirlpool, gasping for air, silent screams.
then the peace of a tranquil, crystal clear lake prevails
and the relaxation of a hot spraying shower returns,
as she lovingly shampoos his hair

54 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)

Rebekha

I had no clue what was going on till the end. Awsome! I loved it to all ends!
Hillary

I thought this poem is kinda creepy! It is very sexual.
J

WOW had to read that one twice
virginia

i like this poem so much i am going to give this one to my boy friend
Alex

I love poetry and short stories, especially ones like these with great detail. The write has artistic talent. And the title definitely says it all! I was able to envision every detail and it made me a little hot. Keep it up.
TerriJo

I liked the first part the best. very sensual! And the ending, "As she lovingly shampoos her hair" was a very good ending; I sometimes do that type of ending.
Elika

A lover and i share these feelings and we call it 'wett'
Jackie

That was so awesome and sexy! Lovin' it!
selby

Beautifull, beautifull, that's all I can say. Beautifully written and the imagery! wow!
miranda

I really loved your poem it was so cool. really touching.
Kari

WOW! Just the feeling of this poem. the desire, love and so much more. kate you really did a great job with this poem. the picture in my mind when i read it is indescribable
Nicole

This poem is in deep thoughts it makes you wonder if love is really deep as they say it is. It's sexy, warm filling, and unique. Author " " keep writing.
brittany

Girl ya poem is on point on a mental level and a physical level! keep doin ya thang!
Lovely

ooh, oh so sexy!
june

i really enjoyed this poem. it reminded me of when me and my bf make love in the shower and then in the end i wash his hair lol
Anita

I really love this poem it was quite erotic, and now I feel the need to go take a cold shower.
sarah

wow you are really deep as me and my bf read this we were like whao ! ~me
Ann

This poem was beautiful!
Shonta

this poem was very sexy and deep
Rachel

Awesome poem girl!
Erik

Soft, quiet, touching. Sensuous, erotic, something. eloquently nice. Not overbearing.
J

It is straight to the point - i loved ever word. Good Job
mary

Its ver y unique it just brings a felling to me that i havnt known for a whil since my fiance is locked up
Tamara

I loved your poem. at first I thought it was ok, until I read your last two lines. Then it hit home. you ended it perfectly. it just beautifully rounded off your poem. bravo!
Sleepay

thank you
Tiff

Very Sexy!
Mei

This is the perfect poem for two, full of surprises, I truly love it. My compliments to the writer.
Michelle

Brilliantly done! I couldn't have said it better myself! Wow, I think I need to go have a cigarette.
Britany

your poem was the bomb. The way you described this expirience is amazing. I could tell by the way you write you are very intelligent and I encourage you please write more so I can read them. holla
Martha

Wow, this is awesome!
IJ

Lovely - well balanced with an excellent ending! Congratulations to you Kate!
Sara

This poem is great and I think that every couple that is love should read it so they will know the real meaning of love.
Qouri

that poem wuz off da chia-ain
Liz

That was a beautiful poem how you described everything it was very good.
princess69

this poem was tyte
Josh

the words paint both image and emotion. i could feel something move inside my soul as i read this, something sensual and tantalizing. excellent poem.
virginia

i like the way you described everything. It is definatly something you would give to someone you are sexualy involved and in love with.
Christopher

Objectively - The poem (as literature) is fantastic, impossible that anything sweeter exists. BRAVO!
Rich

WOW, this poem creates emotions and imagination as I was reading it. It's great man, I love it!
jim

what's your number?
t

A very good poem.
Blackbeard

nice poem
Demitrius

I Loved this Poem, It was Sexual but Beautiful and Erotic.
Adam

Jenny, lmao! about the poem, I actually liked it, it was a bit confusing. but a great poem.
Kervis

Wow! That was great!
sara

wow..i love how you made what you were saying..into something else. It was truely beautiful, and this poem puts into words how i feel when i am with "him", absolutely beautiful
L.W

The plot was so complete and well put together I've never read anything slightly similar
Jenny

what the hell is this poem about?
Susan

I love tthis poem, Kate! I love all the water...
Simmone

I received this poem from a friend on Valentines Day. And it described us to a tee
Chad

Wow this is a great piece of work. I really totally see everything as it happens. Wonder job.
Robert

A very sensual and erotic poem. Wonderfully weaves the deep passion of a sexual act, within the surroundings of nature.
Kim

This is wonderful.
Oma

I love this one !

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