#57 Evermore
Proposals are a difficult thing to do. You have the joy of acceptance and the fear of rejection that seem to occupy your mind and fill it with doubts and hope. This is how I would propose to my love.
This poem originally was published in Love Poems
Evermore
wait just a moment in time freeze the movie in your mind put aside the whispers filter out the doubt look into my eyes ignore the muted shout don't you wish to melt away? into the golden sun? don't you want to whisk away, and have a little fun? aren't you sick of pain and fear inside your life all I know inside of me I want you as my wife I'm tired of the race I'm ill with blank disgrace I want the world to leave us be I want the world to set us free take my hand and smile you can let those tears fall I'll make it worth your while and always give it all through good and bad I'll love you through thick and thin I'll stay from the blinking of the sun to the fading of the day and in the night I'll hold you until the sun appears I'll take away your sorrows, and cast away your fears so let our love combine us and let our spirits soar just take my hand within you and I'll love you evermore |
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desperado
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54 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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ElisaExcellent
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BreannaThat was absolutely beautiful! I love your work. Plz post more so I can read them! Thanks!
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cherryIT IS A NICE & MINDBLOWING. I LOVE THE POEM & THANKS 2 AUTHOR A LOT 4 CREATING SUCH A NICE POEM
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VickiWonderful, touching words and thoughts!
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lillyi think this poem is really nice i never read anything like it befor
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Mikiso sweet
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Kimberlythis poem is a really good one.
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amandaomg this is the best poem ever it is soo cute. i wish i can write like you
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brandonThis is a very good poem, it is plain and simple, gets right to the point and is definetly a good poem to read to that special someone.
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RoekUnbelievable! Best poem I've ever read. You have a gift for words my man. From start to finish you have a spell over the reader. Just amazing! And the word "evermore" at the end, wow. Haha, good luck with your proposal, but I doubt you'll need it.
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Sarahthis is a very beuatiful poem a very well written poem. i like it.
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Wonderthis poem is so beautiful. and whoever you wrote it for is one lucky girl. great job! Wonder*
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ShauntellI cried when I read it. So beautiful!
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HeatherThis poem best describes me and my boyfriend. some people don't want us together. we hav similar backgrounds but our familys are different.
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ThseringIt straight touched my heart! One of the best poem I've ever read. Gud work!
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ShawnWow this poem is a great poem im gonna use it
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markwooooowww. this poem is great. its amazzziing.
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NakiaThis poem talks about my reltationship with my Baby and I am sittinh here reading this poem about to cry cuz Its sooooo ture I mean the words are soooooo ture and ever worte this poem Ive give them an award for this beautyful pretty poem and this poem touch my heart just by the words that was said. (Thank You) for this beautyful poem Nakia Moore
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JenniferI loved it. it was wonderful!
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stephaniei loved it i like some what sad thingz cuz my life s alwayz sad i dont think im ever really happy so ya it was really sweet
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hishamthis is a very good poem,composed by a very talented poet. very inspiring which has a powerfull way of expressing true love and emmotions to the woman who he loves and wants to be his wife. it is a beautiful way of expressing love .
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KristenIf any man proposed to me with this poem, I'd melt into his arms right then and there. I love it!
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heidii thought this wasgreat
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Shenoahi vote that this pome is a 4 out of 5 becuzse it tells that the person wants to the moment for ever. we are doing a poem notebook and this is one of the selected few i am going to put in there. Thank you for your time.
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TierraIf all people were in touch with their feelings the way you are, there would there would be no need for lies.
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TKVery good poem- my dream for a man to say that to me!
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MiriamI love this poem it was very touching. It expressed so much and it also says everything that you can think of
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MARYI LOVE THIS POEM YOU ARE A GOOD POET
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TracyThis poem was great i plan to propose to the love of my life in two months and i cant wait and i hope that when i am doing it all of this is running through my head
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sisamagrooterMy jaw is to the floor, I am in total awe. It is obvious that these words came straight from the heart. The person you were thinking of when you wrote this must be gleeming with pride and sobbing in happiness. Thank you for sharing this inspiration.
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Rickitruly inspiring work
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atiaawwwwwwwww just simply beautiful how we all wish to b loved so truely n sincerely i congratulate u for such a beautiful poem but even more so on bein such a beautiful person
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mousei really love your poem, it really lets the woman you wrote it for know you really love her. keep up the good work.
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BekkaIt was an excellent poem and as I read it, it seemed to be like someone was whispering it in my ear. It flows nicely, and the reader becomes consumed by emotion as they read it. It was amazing!
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ArinAbsoulty Beautiful. Two thumbs up!
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Donnai truly adore this poem. it touched me deeply
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Traciabsolutely beautiful,every romantics dream proposal! wish my partner would send me this, i'd be the happiest gal alive! lovely words and well phrased! thumbs up!
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SonjaAn inspiring poem. It proves that true love still exists. Thnkyou!
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ShehraWould I ever hear these words for my beloved one?
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beautifulprincessI really love this poem. I've had a lot of heartache in my life, but I still believe in true love. You've inspired me to keep believing that there is someone out there who's capable of loving me for all that I am. What you feel for this woman is definitly true love. Your heart is beautiful!
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shannonnicoleTouches my heart..
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TanjaOh.. if ever someone said that to me...
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DanielTranslating the words from the depths of the heart and soul, which sometimes are never revealed. A lump in the throat poem.
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DamariaI Love this poem it helped me write my wedding vows the author is brillant.
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RachelWell to start off your poem is the best.I feel what you are saying,I know exacally what you mean.I`ve read a couple more of your poems your really good. I love reading them there so realy and pure...
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DeadraI really like this it like something that every girl wants their boy to say
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fannyI loved the way the poet used those touching words; I It's a touching poem I give It five stars!
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AntoinetteWho ever she is...she's lucky! Receiving a poem like that is every girls dream. Good luck.
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Sarahjust awesome work
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LarryIf she were free, your poem would have spoken for me.Nevertheless, it was an excellent poem.
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AndreaThis is very beautiful. I like the eloquence of the simplicity you used.
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johnI think this poem is great
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JessicaIt's really good I used it for my project at school,I got an A. I think it should be one of the ones to win. Desperado is a good writer. Thank you for writing it
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MicheleThis poem melted my heart. Any girl would love to get a proposal like this one.
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