This poem is meant to be short and sweet, yet profound and truthful. This poem is my heart put into words; it is the aftermath of a relationship blown away with the wind.

This poem originally was published in Sad Poems - Sad Love Poems

Our Love
our love is a
wasteland
of
promises in vain

of past
of present
of future
nothing

rotting
quietly
in my palms
54 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
  • leeann
    is poem touch my heart by the way sound
  • gladys
    wow this poem is real deep
  • jacqui
    this poem explains exactly how i feel. i think you did a great job
  • CHRIS
    WHEN YOU WROTE THIS POEM IT SHORT SIMPLE, AND TO THE POINT. GOOD JOD I WISH YOU THE BEST AND REMEMBER JUST KEEP WRITING. CHRIS
  • Kim
    The poem said everything a braoken heart feels
  • sara
    i really like your poem because its that really touch your heart
  • judy
    its real good
  • Cindy
    I love your poem. It described exactly what i am going through and had not been able to put into words. You have described in short my current relationship, if you can it that.
  • brittany
    i liked your poem it was short and sweet lol!
  • Gabriela
    my boyfrind just told me that he felt that his love for me not as strong as it used to be. :(
  • samantha
    I really like this poem. It brought back alot of diffrent emotions I use to feel. It was a really good poem!
  • Desseray
    I liked your poem because it's short but it has alot of thoat put in to it
  • Courtney
    I really liked this poem it really touch my heart i really like it.
  • JESSICA
    BEAUTIFUL POEM . ITS A TRUE THING NOT EVERYBODY BELIEVES IT BUT ITS THE SIMPLE TRUTH AFTER THE ONE YOU LOVE LEAVES U .
  • Josephina
    Very true.
  • Emily
    I love how it talks about the failing of the relationship. This inspires me to make sure the next guy I want to date, is the right guy that won't rot in my palm.
  • wilow
    this is so true thats it hurts.you managed to put in words something i been trying to do. much respect and i don't even know you
  • jamie
    it is kindove a short poem but i liked it.
  • Belinda
    i love it although it was short right more
  • charlotte
    it woz bloody gd
  • Amanda
    this is relly sweety i loved it alot
  • toni
    i like this poem because it is different and it really expessies how i feel about someone.
  • Jackie
    This poem touch my heart every day i feel this way it blends in with me and my boyfriend.
  • Jennifer
    it was a wonderful poem touching but right to the point. very very good
  • T
    This poem was short but it said alot. GOOD JOB!
  • Dawn
    It is simple but the words are said so beautifully it touched me it is a nice poem
  • natalie
    your poem was nice
  • dorothy
    I loved this poem cause it saids everything about the love me and my ex had i cryed keep up the good work and i hope to see more from u
  • melissa
    this is a great way to tell your feelings. i love this poem. it's simple and sweet. but yet you show enough, to tell how you really feel. and i love that. you're gifted.
  • unkown
    this is really nice poem thanx for sharing with us keep it upp and give us more love poems
  • Maela
    I love this poem, it really touched my heart and it reminds me about what i have done before. Thanks to Jenawin
  • STACY
    THIS POEM EXPRESS HOW HE FELT WHEN HIS LOVE ONE BROKE HIS HEART BUT IT WILL BE OKAY HOLD YOUR HEAD UP
  • Tiara
    I love this poems cause it helps people to express their deepest feeling without having to hide them from anyone.
  • Rachel
    Yes I enjoyed it very much it touched me a great deal My own promise me the moon and stars but alas did not work so thankyou for putting into works what mine could not do just yet i give it a 10
  • ashley
    I really love that poem i thought it really was romantic
  • nadia
    i think that your poem is really good. i like the way you were able to put in words that the love that you have or had for that guys, was easyly forgoten and that you were able to get over it. i really like it a lot.
  • misha0226
    It's amazing how you can use so few words to describe such a profound feeling. Absolutely wonderful.
  • tanya
    i think it's cute, it reminds mah of one of my x bfs named sammi we constantly fight but i still love him it's just something i feel for him, i don't know what.
  • lindsay
    Great poem! You said what I've been trying to say but never could - i gave it to ex to be - thanks
  • Thuy
    That is really true about love and I like your poem. It is very good.
  • Tara
    this is a realyy explanatory poem short but sweet i like it alot
  • sarah
    i love your poems. i purposely look through this site for your poems. all of them are short and sweet and i love it like that. so beautiful so meaningful. something i can so relate to. thank you
  • TANIA
    beautiful poem, it reminded me of what I had. thank you jenawin
  • Amber
    I think this poem is awesome. What I feel you put into words keep up the awesome poems!
  • vonnE
    your poem is so deep i love it
  • Chris
    amazing. nothing else. just that.
  • Laci
    this poem is short but it says everything a brokenhearted person wants to. it really touched me.
  • JSW
    Not really into poetry, but surf acrossed your poem and you said what i could not. Thank you and you made me fan of this site.
  • Missy
    i really liked your poem.keep writing. good luck in all you do
  • Nova
    keep on Good work.! so simple but meaningful and it really touch my heart..
  • hugo
    i really liked this poem. it inspired me alot
  • zaba00
    really good words
  • John
    your poems leave me breathless thank you
  • GEE
    Simply formed. Mammoth in Meaning.

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