#71 Our Love
This poem is meant to be short and sweet, yet profound and truthful. This poem is my heart put into words; it is the aftermath of a relationship blown away with the wind.
This poem originally was published in Sad Poems - Sad Love Poems
Our Love
our love is a wasteland of promises in vain of past of present of future nothing rotting quietly in my palms |
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jenawin
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54 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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leeannis poem touch my heart by the way sound
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gladyswow this poem is real deep
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jacquithis poem explains exactly how i feel. i think you did a great job
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CHRISWHEN YOU WROTE THIS POEM IT SHORT SIMPLE, AND TO THE POINT. GOOD JOD I WISH YOU THE BEST AND REMEMBER JUST KEEP WRITING. CHRIS
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KimThe poem said everything a braoken heart feels
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sarai really like your poem because its that really touch your heart
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judyits real good
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CindyI love your poem. It described exactly what i am going through and had not been able to put into words. You have described in short my current relationship, if you can it that.
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brittanyi liked your poem it was short and sweet lol!
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Gabrielamy boyfrind just told me that he felt that his love for me not as strong as it used to be. :(
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samanthaI really like this poem. It brought back alot of diffrent emotions I use to feel. It was a really good poem!
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DesserayI liked your poem because it's short but it has alot of thoat put in to it
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CourtneyI really liked this poem it really touch my heart i really like it.
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JESSICABEAUTIFUL POEM . ITS A TRUE THING NOT EVERYBODY BELIEVES IT BUT ITS THE SIMPLE TRUTH AFTER THE ONE YOU LOVE LEAVES U .
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JosephinaVery true.
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EmilyI love how it talks about the failing of the relationship. This inspires me to make sure the next guy I want to date, is the right guy that won't rot in my palm.
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wilowthis is so true thats it hurts.you managed to put in words something i been trying to do. much respect and i don't even know you
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jamieit is kindove a short poem but i liked it.
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Belindai love it although it was short right more
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charlotteit woz bloody gd
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Amandathis is relly sweety i loved it alot
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tonii like this poem because it is different and it really expessies how i feel about someone.
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JackieThis poem touch my heart every day i feel this way it blends in with me and my boyfriend.
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Jenniferit was a wonderful poem touching but right to the point. very very good
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TThis poem was short but it said alot. GOOD JOB!
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DawnIt is simple but the words are said so beautifully it touched me it is a nice poem
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natalieyour poem was nice
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dorothyI loved this poem cause it saids everything about the love me and my ex had i cryed keep up the good work and i hope to see more from u
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melissathis is a great way to tell your feelings. i love this poem. it's simple and sweet. but yet you show enough, to tell how you really feel. and i love that. you're gifted.
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unkownthis is really nice poem thanx for sharing with us keep it upp and give us more love poems
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MaelaI love this poem, it really touched my heart and it reminds me about what i have done before. Thanks to Jenawin
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STACYTHIS POEM EXPRESS HOW HE FELT WHEN HIS LOVE ONE BROKE HIS HEART BUT IT WILL BE OKAY HOLD YOUR HEAD UP
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TiaraI love this poems cause it helps people to express their deepest feeling without having to hide them from anyone.
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RachelYes I enjoyed it very much it touched me a great deal My own promise me the moon and stars but alas did not work so thankyou for putting into works what mine could not do just yet i give it a 10
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ashleyI really love that poem i thought it really was romantic
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nadiai think that your poem is really good. i like the way you were able to put in words that the love that you have or had for that guys, was easyly forgoten and that you were able to get over it. i really like it a lot.
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misha0226It's amazing how you can use so few words to describe such a profound feeling. Absolutely wonderful.
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tanyai think it's cute, it reminds mah of one of my x bfs named sammi we constantly fight but i still love him it's just something i feel for him, i don't know what.
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lindsayGreat poem! You said what I've been trying to say but never could - i gave it to ex to be - thanks
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ThuyThat is really true about love and I like your poem. It is very good.
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Tarathis is a realyy explanatory poem short but sweet i like it alot
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sarahi love your poems. i purposely look through this site for your poems. all of them are short and sweet and i love it like that. so beautiful so meaningful. something i can so relate to. thank you
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TANIAbeautiful poem, it reminded me of what I had. thank you jenawin
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AmberI think this poem is awesome. What I feel you put into words keep up the awesome poems!
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vonnEyour poem is so deep i love it
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Chrisamazing. nothing else. just that.
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Lacithis poem is short but it says everything a brokenhearted person wants to. it really touched me.
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JSWNot really into poetry, but surf acrossed your poem and you said what i could not. Thank you and you made me fan of this site.
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Missyi really liked your poem.keep writing. good luck in all you do
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Novakeep on Good work.! so simple but meaningful and it really touch my heart..
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hugoi really liked this poem. it inspired me alot
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zaba00really good words
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Johnyour poems leave me breathless thank you
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GEESimply formed. Mammoth in Meaning.
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