I am not a poet or a writer as this may show, I have sent some poems and cards to a very special person in my life but feeling the Love that I have for her, and her being so great, I felt at the least she deserves a poem made just for her from my heart. So here it is, Deanna - I love you.
This poem originally was published in Love Poems
Until There Was You
Until there was you I walked the earth alone No hand to hold in mine My heart was all my own Until there was you True love was just a dream Dreams of wonder and tears Dreams of hope and fears Until there was you My life had no direction A road of uncertainty But now we have a journey Together you and me So I thank my lucky stars And God from the heavens above For my heart and soul could never Feel the impact of true love Until there was you . . . |
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1999
Steve
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57 Visitor Comments (from the Voting form)
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jamali dig, yo. dis peom is da bomb. i gonna reccomend it to my homies. sweet brother from another mother. See ya cuz
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Angeliqueromantic & sappy. i like it
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HOTTIETHIS IS A VERY TOUCHING POEM IT GETS 3 STARS
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TannaFrom 1-10 I give it a 9. great Poem
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AeronA Very Intersting Poem.
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OliviaThis is a lovely poem. When I first read it I knew right then that it described me and my boyfriend. Keep up the good work!
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OliviaThis poem reminds me of how I felt for my boyfriend and how I still feel for him. This poem should be put in the hall of fame! Because it truly is special to some people!
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EmilyI really liked it.
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CassieWow! This is how I feel about my boyfriend.
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JenniferThat is a very touching poem.
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wenNice poem. Tears came into my eyes! Thank you! Poetry makes my life better!
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TeegaThis poem was really sweet. It's nice to know how people feel about each other.
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ClassySteve, beautifully written. Thank you! ~Classy~
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CastanovaUntil there was you? I guess you were a loser until there was you, and then you discovered someone else was just like you, and you belong together, until she realizes that your a loser, and will always be the loser you were when you met, and that she keeps moving, and you don't, she becomes a top sales consultant, and you, your a loser.
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RichardMost excellant!
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AshleyIt was a reaaly good poem it tuched my heart.
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DoLpHiNpRiNcEzthis poem is so incredibly sweet, cute, & touching! i just loved it! it was very easy for me to relate to it because it totally expresses the way i feel about my boyfriend alex. this is dedicated to u sweetie!
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KrisI thought that the poem was wonderful! I happen to feel that way right now, so it really hit close to home.
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karllove this poem
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stacyVery sweet and from the heart. As I look for a poem I stumble across yours. Keep up the good work.
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tysonman this poem is great it reminds me and my girlfriend. keep up the good work bud good luck
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KatieThat is a really good poem! Great job and keep up the good work!
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Lesleythis poem touched my heart it made me remember my life before my fiance. i could feel this poem.
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LiNdAHow very true this poem is about finding true love.
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JaniceI really liked this one. I was getting pretty sick of reading the poems. I thought that I would never find a good one. Well I did!
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WishNice!
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TinaThis is a beautiful poem.
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Kathieit's perfect, i love it!
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SarahThis poem is truly wonderful!! You have captured what love is all about
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AshleyI really like this poem. It reminds me of my boyfriend and how I felt before I met him and how I feel now!
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Sammyjoei think you peom was very creative and i myself can relate to it alot. keep up the good work.
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CristenThis poem just describes my first love in perfect context. This poem speaks from my own heart as it did Steve's.
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TINAthis poem touched my heart deeply. keep up the good work!
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MelThankyou for this poem. It really made me think and gave me that warm feeling inside. It's just what I would say to my love.
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MikeA widower for 6 years - I met someone on the internet - yes basically - it was love at first sight - cyber speaking - but we have met and spent quality time together. This poem covers some of my feelings for the one i love
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Milli liked your poem you can write very well. poetry that comes from the heart is best. remember that as you write to your love.
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vbgood
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DavidI loved this poem because it describes the kind of relationship that i have on the internet wit a certain girl. It brought tears to my eyes and as i read on i became more interested. it is just a great overall poem. :-)
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AaronThis work of your was beautiful. I have a special woman in my life, and this made a special connection with me. Thank you for you poem, and please contact me when you publish more. Thanks again.
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TriciaI really love this poem. I am a "kinda" poet. I love to write poems to my husband about my love to him and I really liked this one to send to him too. Thanks.
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Bobthis is beautiful
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angelait is wonderful.
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KatieI think this is such a touching poem. I love it so much. It's so sweet. I almost cried. It made me think of me and my boyfriend and the times we are going through. I wish I could give him this poem. It's a great poem.
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elisabethI like totally connected with the lovin in this poem! It just reminded me of my dayz in wales! Thanx 4 sharin your feelins and lovin bab! totally valid
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BillThis was one of the most beautiful poems I have ever seen . I saw this and was taken back to the first time I saw my wife 15 years ago and I still feel the same way about her today . Thank you
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ShannonThis poem is everything I am wanting to say to the man I love. This is a wicked poem.
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tonisigh,, good one
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LaDwidiaThis poem was very beautiful I really liked. You dit a great job
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ReemREallly co0l poem
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caseyI thought your poem said it right to the point very true and heartfelt i can understand exactly what you mean
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ramniksteve, you couldn't have put my thoughts in words a better way.i hope you find all the happiness in the world with your loved one. my best wishes to you both.
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JenniferFor someone who does not consider himself a writer or a poet, he has put to words what I feel in my heart about the love of my life. For that I applaud him and will gladly call him a "poet!"
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JessicaThis poem is truly beautiful. It is something that I would not mind sharing with a special someone or just my friends. I give the poem a 10. And to the author: GREAT JOB!
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StephanieI loved this poem! Keep Writing from the heart it works for you! I would give you a 10 on this poem.
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aliensimply, i just felt that i'm really in a space jurney space it got very nice imagination
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LinnetteThis is a very sweet poem. Its exactlly how I feel about my boyfriend.
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tammyI was really interested in this poem. I think this poet could be a really good poet.
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